2013年英語(yǔ)一小作文、大作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及范文（文都版）

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2013年考研英語(yǔ)一作文的題目，在形式上和內(nèi)容上，都完美的反應(yīng)了2012年9月所發(fā)布的英語(yǔ)大綱的相關(guān)理念：即中規(guī)中矩，穩(wěn)中有變。

在小作文方面，體裁不變，出題內(nèi)容和形式上有所調(diào)整。

2013年的英語(yǔ)一小作文，考察體裁仍然為信。這是考研小作文自2005年成為英語(yǔ)一的考察題型之后，連續(xù)第三年考察書(shū)信體裁。也是除2010年以外第八次考察書(shū)信格式。

要注意凡是書(shū)信，都有相關(guān)的體裁的格式要求，即在文都課堂上，我反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào)過(guò)的“小作文重格式”的意義所在。

書(shū)信的體裁格式十分固定，我們可以針對(duì)其內(nèi)容，提前準(zhǔn)備如下：
（1）人稱(chēng)：Dear Sir or Madam,
（2）自我介紹：I am…… who
（3）感謝：My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words.

Words fail me when I want to express my sincere gratitude to you.

Thank you for your time and consideration.
（4）回信： I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience.

Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.

落款：your sincerely，Li Ming
以上的內(nèi)容是無(wú)論什么小作文都可以使用的固定內(nèi)容，即可以不變的內(nèi)容。結(jié)合今年的真題，我們一樣可以使用如上提
前準(zhǔn)備好的內(nèi)容，所以說(shuō)考研小作文是“中規(guī)中矩”的。

而小作文的“穩(wěn)中有變”，即其內(nèi)容上的考察的變化，和出題方式的變化。

在原有的2011年和2012年的小作文的題干中，有關(guān)于小作文的書(shū)信內(nèi)容的提示，是使用了分項(xiàng)提示的方式。這種原有的方式呢，會(huì)使考生較為容易掌握相關(guān)的考察重點(diǎn)。但是，也較為容易組織提綱。

而在今年，小作文題目的題干，是以一句話(huà)提示的方式給出即“Write an e-mail of about 100 words to a foreign teacher in your college，inviting him/her to be a judge for the upcoming English speech contest.”
這句話(huà)的內(nèi)容，其實(shí)了許多的重要信息，其中，直接給我們的是：

寫(xiě)作目的：邀請(qǐng)
人物關(guān)系：師生
活動(dòng)名稱(chēng)：English speech contest.
出席目的：be a judge for the contest
在這些直接給出的信息外，其題干中還隱藏了一些相關(guān)內(nèi)容：

（1）人物關(guān)系：雖然同一“college”，但是陌生人，所以自我介紹，應(yīng)出現(xiàn)“student”，
（2）隱含內(nèi)容：比賽的時(shí)間地點(diǎn)
（3）活動(dòng)舉辦：沒(méi)有說(shuō)，所以，隨便寫(xiě)咯。
通過(guò)這種出題方式的變化，英語(yǔ)一的小作文，就其形式上和內(nèi)容上，對(duì)于原有的方式，轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)楦�加靈活的內(nèi)容。這其實(shí)是對(duì)學(xué)生的復(fù)習(xí)深度和英語(yǔ)應(yīng)試能力的一種深化考察。
所以，我們要將我們之前準(zhǔn)備的有關(guān)于“邀請(qǐng)的”句加入寫(xiě)作即可。

范文(126)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of your students who are being taught by you in this college.

The purpose of the letter that I am writing is to invite you to be a judge for the English speech contest which is host by CCAV. This contest will be held in the theater of our college on April 1, 2013,and the occasion will start at seven o'clock in the evening .We would be honored to have you there with us.

I look forward to a favorable reply at your earliest convenience. I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision. Your prompt attention to my letter would be highly appreciated.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,Li Ming

大作文的內(nèi)容，則更是沒(méi)有任何的“驚喜”，即從圖片，到內(nèi)容，都可以說(shuō)是延續(xù)了歷年的出題方向。考研了與大學(xué)生相關(guān)的六類(lèi)主題其中之的成長(zhǎng)內(nèi)容。

可以說(shuō)，其內(nèi)容是完全符合復(fù)合我們預(yù)料，所以，我們可以給出評(píng)價(jià)：中規(guī)中矩！

面對(duì)此內(nèi)容，我們可以結(jié)合之前準(zhǔn)備的內(nèi)容，輕松的寫(xiě)出作文如下：

范文：237
As is vividly depicted in the picture, many young people are standing together when they find that there are so many ways to go.Thus，all of them are stopping there and waiting for help. Obviously, it is the shortage of confidence for their future that makes it impossible for them to get the attainment they want.

Simple as it is, what the picture conveys to us is thought-provoking. With the development of economy and society, competition is increasingly fierce and there are more and more chances for us. But it is impossible for the ones to achieve attainments if they have no striving spirit to surmount the difficulties. Hence, people in mounting numbers put great emphasis on the striving spirit. In fact, it has been universally acknowledged that the ability of fighting is the most essential qualification that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess.

To my way of thinking，the problem that all of the college are just stopping and waiting but no fighting and thinking will generate severe consequences .Measures should be adopted before things get worse.It is high time that all of us ,parents，educators，and the authorities, make combined efforts to make young people change their outlook of life and acquire determined spirit. Only by this way is it reasonable for us to believe that this problem can be perfectly solved in the near future.