2018年考研英語二作文寫作沖刺大解密

考研英語來源：萬學海文 2017-12-19　

各位考生即將開始2018年全國研究生入學考試，英語沖刺復習，作文是必須要攻克的堡壘。對于圖表的出題形式，各位考生以比例描述類為主，尤其是餅狀圖。另外，對于話題方向，各位同學仍然堅持經濟發展為基礎，與社會民生相結合，可以突出大學生或是年輕人群體。

本文提供一篇預測類模擬題，并對范文加以分析，希望對各位同學有所幫助!

參考范文：

What is illustrated in the pie chart demonstrates that obvious differences have occurred in respect of college students‘ options upon graduation。 Based upon the data offered， what we cannot fail to see is that finding jobs accounts for the largest proportion， which is 83%。 Meanwhile， the percentages of going for further education ，going abroad and doing pioneering work are 8.8%， 3.2% and 5% respectively。 What is reflected in the chart is most thought-provoking and worth discussing among the general public for the time being。

The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows。 To begin with， the spirit of challenge is missing among most university students。 As is indicated in the chart above， the majority of students regard finding jobs as their top ideal career option。 The very fact shows that now most university students lack the confidence and courage to face hardships and difficulties in terms of doing pioneering work。 In the second place， we may notice that competition also plays an important role in leading to this phenomenon。 The present society is filled with fierce competition and most college students are under great pressure。 Therefore diploma is viewed as the most important factor in terms of their standards， which makes the increasing number of students would like to pursuit further study。 There may be other factors contributing to this phenomenon， but I think what has been mentioned above is generally reasonable。

Taking into account what has been argued ，we can come to the conclusion that some necessary measures should be taken to make the correct choice among university students。 For one thing， a widespread education campaign must be launched to popularize correct options。 For another， a healthy social environment should be created so as to guide the development of students’ mind。 Only in these ways can university students encounter obstacles of all sorts and reach the summit of success in our harmonious society。

參考譯文：

上述餅狀圖清楚展現了大學生畢業時選擇方向上的鮮明不同。根據所提供的數據，我們可以看到，求職占了最大比例，為83%，而考研、出國、創業分別占了8.8%， 3.2% 和5%。圖表中所反映的數據在當今社會中引起人們的反思并值得討論。

如下因素能解釋這一現象。首先。當今大學生缺乏挑戰精神。正如圖表中所表明的，當今大學生把求職作為首要的職業選擇。事實表明當今大學生缺少創業中在面對困難挫折時所需要的信心和勇氣。第二，我們也許會注意到競爭在導致這個現象中起著重要的作用。當今社會充滿了競爭，大學生處于巨大的壓力之下。因此文憑被認為是體現水平的最重要因素，這就導致越來越多的大學生選擇繼續考研。也許還有其他因素能導致這個現象，但我認為剛剛我說的基本是合理的。

綜上所述，得出結論，應當幫助大學生在大學畢業時作出正確選擇。一方面，應該在大學生中開展教育普及大學生就業時的正確選擇。另一方面，應該創造良好的社會環境引導大學生樹立正確的思想觀。只有這樣，大學生才能在我們這個和諧社會里克服各種困難達到成功的巔峰。

亮點句式：

1 Based upon the data offered， we can see that-> Based upon the data offered， what we cannot fail to see is that。。。

注釋：what we cannot fail to see is that 是we can see that 的高級表達。“依據所提供的數據，我們可以看到。。。”

2 Meanwhile， the percentages of going for further education -> Meanwhile， it is pronounced that the percentages of going for further education

注釋：It is pronounced that。。。是萬能句首擴充，表示：“顯而易見的是，。。。”

3 we may notice that。。。also plays an important role in leading to this phenomenon。 “我們也許會注意到。。。。。。在導致這個現象中起著重要的作用。”

寫作模板：

首段描圖：What is illustrated in the pie chart demonstrates that obvious differences have occurred in respect of 主題(名詞短語)。 Based upon the data offered， what we cannot fail to see is that XXX accounts for the largest proportion， which is/are 數值。 Meanwhile， it is pronounced that the percentages of 對比對象 1，2，3 are 數值1，2，3 respectively。

“上述餅狀圖清楚展現了。。。。。。上的鮮明不同。根據所提供的數據，我們可以看到，。。。。。。占了最大比例，為。。。。。。，而對比對象1、對比對象2、對比對象3分別占了數據1，數據2 和數據3。圖表中所反映的數據在當今社會中引起人們的反思并值得討論。”

萬能句型：

The contributing factors responsible for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows。/It is no difficulty for us to come up with several possible reasons to account for this phenomenon。 “原因如下：。。。”

There may be other factors contributing to this phenomenon， but I think what has been mentioned above is generally reasonable。

注釋：此句型用于中間段原因分析的結束句。總結——“也許還有其他因素能解釋這一現象，但我認為剛剛我說的基本是合理的。”