2018考研倒計時，英語寫作高分必備

考研英語來源：萬學海文 2017-08-30　

現在已經進入了考研倒計時階段，目前提升速度最為明顯的還是寫作部分。之前卞老師和大家分享的是大作文第三段寫作要素，今天依然和大家繼續談談第三段的寫作要點。

第三段結尾部分是整篇文章的總結部分，對于全文來說有點睛和提分的作用。框架也分為負向文章行文思路與正向文章行文思路兩大類。上次和大家分享的是負向文章思路，本次卞老師給大家分析積極正面的文章行文思路。

我們先以2001年考研英語真題為例。在2001年“愛心是一盞燈，在越黑暗的地方越明亮”的寫作題目中，范文的結束段是這樣來進行的：

It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are. We should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers. Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines.

這是作文的第三段。在這個段落中，作者在此明確了自己的觀點：表示愛心的最好方式是幫助比我們更加不幸的人。同時作者又給出了自己的建議，希望每個人都隨時準備向有困難的人伸出援助之手。

上面的例子是一個關于正面的話題，這是圍繞“愛心”展開的。因此，在這一段中，首先需要去弘揚這種美德，或者現象。在第三段的第一句，重申論點是非常有必要的。例如這句話“It is my view that the best way to show love is to help people who are more unfortunate than we are”，為了使我們的社會更加美好，這樣積極正面的例子是我們每一個人都要效仿并學習的。在第三段的第二句中，需要表明“當前社會的確很需要這種正能量或者這種積極正面的行為”。正如第一個例子中的這句話“we should always be ready to give a helping hand to those who are in trouble, no matter whether they are family members or complete strangers”，范文中再次表明社會中的每個人都應該隨時做好準備去幫助其他人。無論是作為我們的家人，還是陌生人，我們都不應該見他人有難而視而不見。在第三段的第三句中，文章應該“對未來的憧憬或者期待”進行表述。例如，“Only by doing so can we help to make the world a better place, for, as the picture shows, the darker the shadows of sorrow become, the more brightly the lamp of love shines”，針對這種正面行為或現象，如果一直保持著這種正能量，社會將會變得更美好，愛心的光將照亮悲傷的陰影。

下面卞老師給大家總結一下積極正向文章整體的寫作思路。

正向文章行文思路 (積極倡導)：

( Confidence ) is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society. And all hands are supposed to join together to (foster people’s confidence).

1、社會層面

(1)媒體傳遞正能量media

The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.

(2)教育education

Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world. Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood. Specifically, self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.

(3)學校college

College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well. Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.

curriculum 校內課程

extra curriculum課外活動

electives n選修課 elective curriculums

2、個人層面

(1)改善自我

①Reading books. We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books. You will find what you cannot get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.

such as +N/doing

for example,+句子

②Exercising. Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point. Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.

find oneself +adj

find oneself +doing sth

③+給予他們時間成長Of course, we cannot grow to be (a confident person) overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.

(2)志愿工作voluntary work

It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work. During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened. You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.

以上是卞老師給大家總結的大作文第三段積極正面文章的寫作思路，大家也需要不間斷的訓練和積累素材。在這里卞老師提前祝大家金榜題名。